The way you've presented this is particularly effective, and your use of still images from your own thriller is strong.
You need to add discussion of the images you've used from other thrillers and examine how your representation is similar/ different to (say) Scarlett Johansson in The Black Dahlia, etc.
Make it clear that the sections entitled "Ruby" and "Ted" are about Age by writing "Ruby - Representation of Age" etc.
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ReplyDeleteThe way you've presented this is particularly effective, and your use of still images from your own thriller is strong.
ReplyDeleteYou need to add discussion of the images you've used from other thrillers and examine how your representation is similar/ different to (say) Scarlett Johansson in The Black Dahlia, etc.
Make it clear that the sections entitled "Ruby" and "Ted" are about Age by writing "Ruby - Representation of Age" etc.